A Small Note-First of all, before you all read this poem I'd like to tell that this poem is written by me some years ago and at that time some friends spread it all over. So you can find this poem at many places. Believing me or not is all up to you.
I think I should now start copy writing my creations so that I don't have to see suspicion in the eyes of people.
Now you can read-
Kitabo ke panne palat ke sochte hai,
Yu palat jaye zindagi to kya baat ho,
Tamanna jo poori ho khwabo me,
Haqikat ban jaye to kya baat ho,
Kuch log matlab ke liye dhundte hai mujhe,
Bin matlab ke koi aaye to kya baat ho,
Katl kar ke to sab le jayenge dil mera,
Koi baato se le jaaye to kya baat ho,
Jo sharifo ki sharafat me baat na ho,
Ek sharabi keh jaaye to kya baat ho,
Zinda rehne tak to khushi dunga sabko,
Kisiko meri maut pe khushi mil jaye to kya baat ho....
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Really Nice one, i know why people don't believe you wrote it. The comparisons u made (at least 1st three ones) need good thoughtfulness, which is something totally unexpected from a person like u :P
ReplyDeletebtw, may be i m wrong, but i feel some problem in stanzas last and second last! I'll tell why.
second last: I don't connect shareef and sharabi. Jo shareef nahi keh sakaa vo sharaabi keh gaya to kya hua? Sharabi acha ya bura nahi hota! Depend karta hai vo sharab peeke kucch bura to nahi karta.
last: teri maut pe jinn bhi 100-200-500 logon ko khushi hogi, usse "kya baat ho" kaise hua? Ideally, ye hona chhaiye: mere jaane ke baad bhi vo khushi bani rahe, to kya baat ho.... (ya aisa hi kucch)
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ReplyDeleteKuch log matlab ke liye dhundte hai mujhe,
Bin matlab ke koi aaye to kya baat ho,
- tune khud kaha hai ki kucch logg hi tujhe matlab ke liye dhoondte hain. To baaki sab to waise bhi tere paas bina matlab ke aate hain. Fir? Vo baat to kai baar ho chuki hai, fir kaise kya baat ho?
@ Mayank Bhaiya,
ReplyDeleteThanks, will take care of all the things you suggested from next time. Abhi ye hi jhelo.
बेहोशी के ये ख़ूबसूरत ख़यालात,
ReplyDeleteहोश वाले समझ लें तो क्या बात हो...(with reference to the name of this blog)
Beautiful poem!
@ Mohi...Wonderful lines. Thanks for appreciating.
ReplyDeleteNice 1 . . .
ReplyDeletekahne Se to kar koi samajha hai , Koi bin kahe samaj jaye to kya baat ho ... :)